Wednesday, March 4, 2009

the forest and the sea

our adjectives are different
you like the shore
edges meet there, singularity
i like the forest
it captures the wilderness
that escapes from you

you build your bonfire on the shore
and every once in a while
the wind scatters burnt embers from your fire
and sets ablaze the forest

under the languid clouds and effervescent sky
each time the sea douses the fire
each time the forest grows again

2 comments:

mêlée said...

the intensity of what one feels happy or sad, the thoughts that float here and there, the imaginationsthat flies high with a root somewhere....you capture it all in your writing!
really good job :)

mêlée said...

the intensity of what one feels happy or sad, the thoughts that float here and there, the imaginationsthat flies high with a root somewhere....you capture it all in your writing!
really good job :)